This week’s topic is such a
controversial one. On one hand we have
people saying that yes we should kill criminals that have preyed on innocent
victims and left life scarring effects on families and loved ones. Then we have people saying that the death
penalty is wrong because then it makes us just as wrong to kill someone, a life
for a life, and the ones who have to issue the execution are also scarred for
life. So what is the answer to this
question? If we use lethal injection as
a tool for justice then we are setting an example to others and possibly
preventing more people from committing similar crimes. If we allow people to sit in prison and
“think about what they have done,” then you are allowing them to live their
life while others were not spared. Not
only do they get to live, but get the taxpayers to pay for their life behind
bars. They may not be able to live
freely in society, but technology has allowed them to keep up with everything
that is going on. Many prisoners have
access to TV, internet, and phones allowing them to connect with the outside
world. Even those who are on a tight
lock down have managed ways of communicating beyond bars through a system of
codes and can therefore have outside sources fill their places and continue to
kill. I think that the death penalty
should remain as an example to others. I
believe that it does help in many ways to stop violence. With today’s technology and advances in the
criminal investigation world, we are better able to target killers allowing us
to finalize our decision to execute them without the feeling that we have
killed an innocent person. Honestly, if
you really think about it, the lethal injection is still an easy way out for
criminals.

I have to agree with the death
penalty because I think that it helps to set standards. We make examples out of people and crime goes
down. How are we setting a good example to
society when we allow people to have a “life” in prison? There are many shows about prison life that
show us what goes on. Some prisons allow
people to access to things like computers, books, and TV. Others that are more strict allow inmates
only 30 minutes of time outside and other than that they are confined to a
small cell with nothing. The thing that
people also see on these prison shows is that the people behind the bars are
still committing crimes! You would think that being sentenced to life behind
bars would teach them a lesson and try to have them turn themselves
around. Instead they are digging
themselves into deeper holes, which only makes society try to find other
solutions to help them become less violent and takes the focus off of people
with real problems like homeless and medical.
Our state funded money gets spent more on trials and programs for
prisoners then it does for people who actually deserve life. The death penalty helps in controlling the
prison population, sets an example for others before they commit a crime, and serves
as justice for victims’ families. Technology
has allowed us to correctly identify criminals allow for less error of killing
and innocent person and lethal injection allows for a humane way of disposing
of the criminals.
Facts:
Gandhi-“an eye for an eye” http://www.quotationspage.com/quote/30302.html
Camus-“capital punishment..” http://www.antideathpenalty.org/quotes.html
Tutu-“…Not justice” http://www.antideathpenalty.org/quotes.html
Laura,
ReplyDeleteNice work. I enjoyed reading this post.
But I would like to see more facts, in order to be fully convinced. The quotes are appropriate, but what statistics could you draw from the documents I provided?
Your argument was based around a hypothetical situation. That is good to get your readers emotions up, but follow it with some statistics that show you're on track (for example: 70% of victims' families felt closure after the execution)... if that's the angle you're going to take.
Also, in your analysis...
I like the way you go with "standards", but I am not convinced about prison culture through the example of tv and movies. These shows are for entertainment purposes. They make it seem like this behavior is the norm. I would try to find stronger facts (they're out there).
Overall, excellent writing. You have the foundation, just go forward with more supportive facts/stats to fully convince your readers.
GR: 90