Can the US win the war in Afghanistan?
The war in Afghanistan has been
going on for over a decade. We invaded
the Middle East shortly after the 9/11 attacks, and from this war we have only
been able to spend millions of dollars and watch thousands of innocent people
die. Throughout the years Americans have
slowly lost their faith that this war will end.
The only notable thing that has been obtained was the death of Osama bin
Laden. We have had examples of prior
wars, such as the Soviet-Afghan wars, and we have learned nothing from this. The geography of the country plays a big part
on their success by being a trap in wars along with the Afghan guerilla
forces. Nowadays the Taliban plays a
sick game of hide and seek with the US by hiding in the mountains while luring
the US troops into other territories.
They are able to remain hidden while the US troops remain trapped on
their bases due to the fact that they don’t know where to start. Another thing that is hurting the US in
trying to win the war is the fact that we have countries such as Pakistan and
Saudi Arabia that are supposed to be our allies but are secretly helping the
enemies. The strong religious background
enables this to happen. We ended up
searching for Osama bin Laden for ten years in the wrong country because of
this. This has also made it impossible
to distinguish between the civilians and the guerrillas.
What would victory look like?
I think that if the US was
actually able to end the war in Afghanistan that democracy would be
spread. People in Afghanistan would stop
being afraid of things and there would be a lot of changes. Women would be allowed to get an education,
children would stop being trained to become killers, buildings could be built
and societies would be able to prosper. A country would be able to rebuild themselves
with our help and would become better because of it. Innocent lives would not be lost and our
troops would be able to return home to their own families. We would also save a lot of money and could
go back to helping our own country.
What will it take to win?
I think that in order for us to
win we need to have the cooperation of our allies to capture those people who
insist on the continued fighting. There
is no need for people to have to die every day.
The article that was posted about Sgt. Bales was a tragedy. 19 innocent people were killed and this man
is to blame. He has become mentally
unstable. We need for our troops to be
of sound mind and keep the focus on ending the war, but unfortunately the
longer they are there, the more unhealthy they become. We need negotiations, diplomacy, and
acquiring more allies would help to solve this problem.




Laura,
ReplyDeleteNice article, but you're missing a few key features.
1. Stick to the format. Your first paragraph is a great intro. I got a sense of your opinion. But who/what still supports this war? Who thinks that we should keep fighting? Remember to include the opposing view. This paragraph is worth 20 points!
Maybe it was confusing for this topic.
2. Be sure to include your facts and sources (worth 10 points)
Overall, good writing, but it seems just a little rushed. Try to keep your focus on the format, so that you craft a clear, well-thought out argument.
GR: 75